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This is done or now. I listen to all the critics and I tried to make it look better. And I think it does. I'm really happy with the result. I could work a bit more on the details though. I'll maybe edit work on it again when i have more time.

The red dragons have return after a few hundred years. Humans don't want to live in harmony with the dragons as they used too. A battle starts.

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:icondanielhovdahl:
That looks pretty cool! First of all, I really don't think the dragon would be able to keep airborne in that narrow street with that big of a wingspan, as he would hit the buildings and basically crash.
And you should take a look at the perspective too, the buildings on the right, doesn't seem to match up with the buildings on the left (mainly the windows) or vice versa. The hight on the windows don't match up on the closest building on the left.
But you got a good sense of depth and well done on the flames! But I think you should remove the black lines around the teeth.

But keep at it, great detail and very good work on the scales.
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:iconcapngarrett:
This is a brilliantly impressive piece, the fire works well against the sky.
The blue highlights on the dragon's back are a nice touch, although I think they're a bit overdone on the underside. Maybe if they were orange like the higlights on the left side of the dragons face, on the edges of the ridges/horns it would work better giving the fire more ambience.
The dragon also have quite a passive expression, I would have expected its jaws to be open wider, and angrier looking, but who knows, it might be having fun rather than in a rage.

Thise are the only quibbles I have with the piece, everything else is spot on, it's a great background with the right amount of detail, and the contrast is good too.
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:iconmiss-ninja:
Amazing! One of your best works yet, I think. Great colour scheme and detail work. I like how you did the flames. Nice composition, too. Awesome work.

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good work hun ^^

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go dragons :w00t:

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:iconzorrino:
Good piece! I use to draw a perspective grid before for angles like this.

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15 hours well used, it looks fantastic.

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:icontoshema:
Thats so awesome!!!! great work!!!

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Impressive work ! Just so WOW :iconwowplz: ...

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:iconcheese-demon:
nice this reminds me of reign of fire

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That's simply amazing.

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